Monday, September 29, 2008

№ 1
Hi, pals!
Yesterday I read the “Godfather” Yesterday. It is about cool guys and steepness. The Don makes him living by selling “Olio Di Oliva” (olive oils). Things are going smoothly! Constantly he helps a destitute. And a destitute remembers it. He has got four sons and a daughter- Sonny, Freddy, Hagen, Michel and Connie. Hagen is a barrister and the Don’s councilor. Michel is the real guy! He is respected in the criminal word. Connie is the beautiful girl, but Connie’s husband is the pompous idiot…
Every one marveled this clan. The clan enjoys its popularity. One day, drug dealers will offer a deal to the clan… There will be broken bones and blood.
You mustn’t live in the past, you should read this book!!!

№ 2
Oh, hello!
My dearest friend, I read one of thrilling books yesterday. This book teaches us to live in the criminal word. The character of the Don shows the respected and talented man. Love story of his son and the beautiful lady shows sincere feelings. Oh, their love is delightful! He is handsome and he is pleasant to deal with. She is the charming and understanding lady. If it is interesting for you, I can give you this book.
It will be unforgettable reading!!!!

1 comment:

Natalia Eydelman said...

What's "steepness"? I don't quite undertsand who the intended audience of the first message is? Why can it be interested in this story? Then, what all the mentioned facts are meant for? Is it the way to attract the reader's attention to the book? From what you have written, it can be concluded you think that being a mafia boss and involve in all sorts of illegal activities is exciting.

Message to your pal: why this choice of register? Are you on frindly terms with him/her?

More persuasive arguments are necessary to make your friend read this book.

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