Tuesday, October 28, 2008

Do you believe that equality for women means that women should also do such thing as military service? My opinion:

Advantages:
· Women claim one’s rights to equality. Now they are independent & strong
· Military service is a good life’s school for women
· Women acquire skills in camping, shooting, signaling and etc
· They didn’t disgrace themselves in a terrible situation

Disadvantages:
· as a rule they are single
· usually this women aren’t feminine





What are the advantages & disadvantages of our ever-increasing use of computer technology? My opinion:

Advantages:
· computer technology help us to be people with ours ear to the ground
· computer technology make easier our life
· it is helps us to find a useful information


Disadvantages:
· it is bed for our eyesight
· it is takes up our free time
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Natalia Eydelman said...

1. Equality for women: you have twice as many points on the list of advantages, which can make your essay unballanced. Also, the arguments against are less weighty than those in favor of women serving in the army.

2. Have a look at the suggestions other students have about developing an essay about computers. Yours are fine but there are too few of them. After you have added more points, you should think about the order to present them in and supporting evidence to include.

October 28, 2008 at 11:59 AM

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