advantagers:
- information of all types can be in one place, so it is viry convinient to keep information on the computer;
- faster and, again, more convinient to lool for information using computer's Internet
- good way to work with photograths, texts, documents, etc
- you can connect with people when you need to do it, send a message, for example
- you can create many different things using computer, for example, to write (type) a novel, to draw a picture, to work up a photo and many different things
disadvantagers:
- health problems especially problems with eyes
- in these time people, especially youth waste a lot of time playing computer games or chatting
- computer occupies a lot of space on the table
- technical problems which always accompany a computer are really irritative
- it costs a lot. If you want to have a copmuter that wouldn.t be broken in a week you have to pay a big sum of money
I think that adding some examples to my essay would be a good thing)
2 comments:
All good points. Next, you need to think whether to include all these points in your essay; what order to present them in and what supporting evidence to use.
Margo, I really like your points. But it seems to me that you can unite two points, namely good way to work with photograf,etc and you can create many diferent things.
Also I really like your points about computer games. I have the same, and I agree with you!But I think that point about the space on the table is not very importaint, because nowadays there are a lot of computers' models:from big to small.
Your work really good!
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