1. It is very fulfilling to help others because:
1)it makes everybody happy;
2)makes you feel yourself important;
3)others will help you.
2. Honesty is the most valuable trait of a friend’s character because:
1)friend is the one you want to rely on;
2)it is the basis of any relationship;
3)it lets us to trust him/her all our thoughts.
3. Passing my degree has been my greatest achievement so far because:
1)it shows who I am in this world;
2)it is my own achievment;
3)I've done a lot to achieve it.
4. My studies is the one thing that give me real satisfaction because:
1)I'm getting more educatted;
2)it helps me to explore our world;
3)I feell my head filling with knowledges.
5. Using a computer is probably one of the most important skills for a person nowadays because:
1)technologies are developing very fast;
2)all spheres of our life are connected with it;
3)it really mekes our life easier.
6. Feeling competent about doing my job gives me confidence because:
1)I know that nobody would do it better;
2)I know that I won't do something wrong;
3)it makes me understand that I am on the right place.
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Nikita--
Thesis statements are formulated as a series of statements which should be parallel in form. See if this is the case with your Th st-t #1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6.
Th st-t #3. Also, what's the meaning of "passing your degree"? Your point #1 is too general and sounds lofty; #2 and 3 are too close - I don't see how you can develop them separately.
Th st-t #4: point 3 expresses the result of doing something you mention in 1 and 2. Also, "knowledge" in E is uncountable and, as such, does not have a plural form.
Th st-t #5: why the fact that technologies develop very fast makes it one of the most important skills to acquire? Item 2 is too broad. Are the points arranged using some logical pattern: general to specific, for example?
Th st-t #6: it's altogether inspecific and vague. I can't see how it can be developed.
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